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071217_B_Mix_money per week

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  • #154073
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    Nguyễn Quang
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    the chart below shows the amount of money per week spent on fast foods in Britain.

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  • #154156

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    Please kindly check my notes here, and feel free to leave comments if you have any questions. Thanks a lot :)

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  • #154193

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    the sample is too long.264/150

  • #154301

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    That’s right, and that’s also the reason why you should be critical when learning from any sample answer. Some has good vocabularies and phrases, but poor data analyses, and vice versa.

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