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    10. The first chart below gives information about the money spent by
    British parents on their children’s sports between 2008 and 2014. The
    second chart shows the number of children who participated in three sports
    in Britain over the same time period.

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    The first line graph shows the money contributed to children’s sport
    activities by their families in Britain between 2008 and 2014. The second
    diagram compares the number of children taking part in three kinds of
    sports such as soccer, athletics and swimming during the same time.

    Overall, a lot of parents allocated more and more fee for their children’s
    sports. Besides, football was the favorite play of many young generation in
    Britain through the period recorded.

    As can clearly be seen, the average monthly spending on children’s sports
    started at nearly 20 million in 2008 and increase significantly to over 30
    in 2014.

    Besides, standing at approximately 1 million in the first investigated
    year, the number of children participating in athletics witnessed a sudden
    increase to closely 5 million in the following four years before decreasing
    slightly in the last year.

    By contrast, the rate of children taking part in football was by far the
    highest sport and fluctuated around 7.5 million while the figure for
    swimming experienced a gradual growth from below 2.5 million in 2008 to
    about 5 in 2014.

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    [22:54:39, 13/1/2018] Cám ơn các bạn!

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    sao anh chị không đính kèm bài sửa ạ

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    Hello bạn,

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    Cám ơn bạn.

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