May 5, 2018 at 12:52 am #186616
19. International community must act immediately to ensure all nations to
reduce their consumption of fossil fuels e.g. gas and oil. To what extend
do you agree or disagree?
Anh chị ơi, ví dụ câu nào khong hợp, ý chưa sát thì các anh chị viết lại
câu khác giúp em luôn nhá. Nhiều anh chị CHỈ ra lỗi sai mà cũng chẳng viết
lại nên em cũng chẳng biết đường nào mà lần. em cảm ơn anh chị nha.
Many people think that the international organizations have to act urgently
to guarantee all countries to decrease their consumption of fossil fuels
such as coal, oil, gas. Personally, I completely agree with this view point
due to some following reasons.
On the one hand, I believe that fossil fuels can play an important role in
all aspects such as living quality, economy, politics and environment.
Nobody can deny that fossil fuels have a variety of applications,
from electricity production, to transport fuel and create common
products. Taking oil as a typical example, oil often is used to produce a
lot of essential products such as paint, detergents, cosmetics and
medicines. More importantly, if a nation can own a great deal of fossil
fuel resources, they can make a lot of considerable profits by importing
into different nations. Therefore, the energy commerce certainly stimulates
the cooperation with other areas and consolidates their positions.
On the other hand, I believe that international community should require
all nations decrease the consumption of fossil fuels immediately. In
reality, fossil fuels are the largest source of carbon dioxide, a
greenhouse gas which contributes to climate change, and their production
causes both environmental and human health impacts. Hence, if the fossil
fuel used percentage becomes higher, there will be the absence of the
people as well as the Earth in the future because of the environmental
pollutions. In addition, fossil fuels are non-renewable resources, as they
have taken millions of years to form. Therefore, when all countries control
their consumptions, their posterities would have more chance to use this
power in the future.
From what has been discussed above, one can reach a conclusion that
international governments must require all nation decline their use of
fossil fuels immediately.
consolidates their positions. Ý em là củng cố vị trí của họ trên trường
quốc tế, thì nói thế nào ạ
câu này viết thế nào ạ: NẾU con người còn tiếp tục sử dụng nhiên liệu hóa
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