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    19. International community must act immediately to ensure all nations to
    reduce their consumption of fossil fuels e.g. gas and oil. To what extend
    do you agree or disagree?
    Anh chị ơi, ví dụ câu nào khong hợp, ý chưa sát thì các anh chị viết lại
    câu khác giúp em luôn nhá. Nhiều anh chị CHỈ ra lỗi sai mà cũng chẳng viết
    lại nên em cũng chẳng biết đường nào mà lần. em cảm ơn anh chị nha.

    Many people think that the international organizations have to act urgently
    to guarantee all countries to decrease their consumption of fossil fuels
    such as coal, oil, gas. Personally, I completely agree with this view point
    due to some following reasons.

    On the one hand, I believe that fossil fuels can play an important role in
    all aspects such as living quality, economy, politics and environment.
    Nobody can deny that fossil fuels have a variety of applications,
    from electricity production, to transport fuel and create common
    products. Taking oil as a typical example, oil often is used to produce a
    lot of essential products such as paint, detergents, cosmetics and
    medicines. More importantly, if a nation can own a great deal of fossil
    fuel resources, they can make a lot of considerable profits by importing
    into different nations. Therefore, the energy commerce certainly stimulates
    the cooperation with other areas and consolidates their positions.

    On the other hand, I believe that international community should require
    all nations decrease the consumption of fossil fuels immediately. In
    reality, fossil fuels are the largest source of carbon dioxide, a
    greenhouse gas which contributes to climate change, and their production
    causes both environmental and human health impacts. Hence, if the fossil
    fuel used percentage becomes higher, there will be the absence of the
    people as well as the Earth in the future because of the environmental
    pollutions. In addition, fossil fuels are non-renewable resources, as they
    have taken millions of years to form. Therefore, when all countries control
    their consumptions, their posterities would have more chance to use this
    power in the future.

    From what has been discussed above, one can reach a conclusion that
    international governments must require all nation decline their use of
    fossil fuels immediately.

    consolidates their positions. Ý em là củng cố vị trí của họ trên trường
    quốc tế, thì nói thế nào ạ
    câu này viết thế nào ạ: NẾU con người còn tiếp tục sử dụng nhiên liệu hóa
    thạch, trái đất sẽ ngày càng bị đẩy đến gần bờ vực thẳm.

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    [5/5/2018, 11:58:13 AM] Cám ơn các bạn!

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