Chữa Writing 911
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11. Some students take one year off between finishing school and going to
university, in order to travel or to work. Do you think advantages outweigh
disadvantages?Nowadays, students often intend to take a gap year after graduating from
high school to travel or to take a job instead of continuing pursuing
higher education. While this may cause some potential problems, I believe
that the benefits are greater.On the one hand, there are a number of negative impacts when learners take
one year off to work or travel. Indeed, it is difficult for young learners
to complete their works when they lack of knowledge as well as experience
about various aspect of life. Therefore, they have to spend a lot of time
learning how to schedule their timetable, make money by themselves as well
as eliminate stress. Besides, students can forgot a lot of important
knowledge after a long time so they will face some troubles when going to
univerisites.On the other hand, taking a gap year definitely create a lot of gold
opportunities for students to become well- rounded person in the future.
Firstly, when students have time to travel or to work before getting higher
education, they certainly have some changes to try a lot of job to seek out
their favorite career. Secondly, they will accumulate a lot of valuable
experiences and social skills to face the dilemma in their life. Nobody can
deny that experiences about life make some major contribution to get a well-
paid job in the future. Last but not least, the time to travel or work
definitely help students make more friends, create some good connects and
treasure their life.In conclusion, although taking a gap year between finishing school and
going to university have some disadvantages, I completely believe that
advantages outweigh disadvantages.Với dạng bài : Do you think advantages outweigh disadvantages?. Trong bài
trên, em chọn cách thuận lợi nhiều hơn bất lợi. Vậy em viết như trên đã
được chưa.Nếu cũng với dạng bài này, em viết là nó chỉ có lợi thôi, không có hại, em
sẽ triển khai ý như thế nào ạ.Anh chị có thể cho em một bài mẫu về loại: thuận lợi hơn bất lợi, và một
bài mẫu mà người ta viết chỉ có lợi—không có hại được không ạ, đề bài
khác cũng được. em cảm ơn anh chị[4/11/2018, 9:44:27 PM] Cám ơn các bạn!
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