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    23. Some people think the technology makes life complex, so we should make
    life simpler without using the technology. Agree or disagree?

    Nowadays, many people suggest eliminating technology from their life
    because the technological progresses make their life become more
    complicated. Personally, I completely disagree with this viewpoint due to
    some following reasons.

    On the one hand, I believe that the technological development causes more
    drawbacks for our life. In fact, many countries in the world exploit the
    technological inventions to product many dangerous weapons, provoke some
    enemy countries to gain their aims. Therefore, the life of plenty of
    citizens is becoming increasingly more complex when there are some
    appearances of massive wars among countries. Taking nuclear weapon as a
    typical example, the Korean government showed their ambitions to become the
    leaders of the world by try producing and releasing many rockets.

    On the other hand, I also think that the technological advances definitely
    make a considerable contribution to individual and community. Needless to
    say, a lot of greatest breakthroughs in technology actually help citizen’s
    life more comfortable and convenient. In reality, many people learn how to
    utilize some modern technology into production, entertainment and health
    care. For example, young generation can easily make a connection with their
    international friends to broaden their horizons and expand their
    relationship by computers or smart phones. Besides, producers have applied
    plenty of smart tools into production line to improve quality and

    From what has been discusses above, one can reach a conclusion that
    although the technological advance make the life more complex, people
    should not restrict the existence of these tool in the life of each person
    and the world.

    Anh chị gửi cho em một bài mẫu nha, em cảm ơn ạ.

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    [5/10/2018, 6:36:18 AM] Cám ơn các bạn!

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