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Cam 8, test 2, task 1_Spending of a UK school in 1981, 1991, 2001 (Pie charts)

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    Cam 8, test 2, task 1:
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    Answer:
    The pie charts demonstrate the changes in annual expenditure of five
    categories, namely Insurance, Teachers’ salaries, Furniture and equipment,
    Resources (e.g. books) and Other workers’ salaries by a certain UK school
    in 1981, 1991 and 2001.

    Overall, Teachers’ salaries represented the prime part of all spending. In
    addition, Insurance and Other workers’ salaries underwent a consistent
    trend (upward and downward respectively) while the others fluctuated
    widely.

    Teachers’ salaries accounted for 40% or higher, with 40% in 1981, 50% in
    1991 and 45% in 2001. Insurance experienced a significant rise, with the
    figure of 2001 was fourfold that of 1981 (8% in comparison to 2%). In
    contrast, Other workers’ salaries encountered a plummet, with the figure of
    2001 was just over a half of that of 1981 (15% in comparison to 28%).
    Regarding Furniture and equipment, before reaching 23% in 2001, it
    decreased dramatically to 5% from initial point (15%). As far as Resources
    (e.g. books) is concerned, it climbed from 15% to 20%, then fell sharly to
    approximately a half, with 9%.

    P/S: could you share with me some more other words/ phrases to describe a
    trend which occurred in the past. I just know some words such as
    experienced, underwent (encountered: I am not sure)?

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  • #190096

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    Well done! Keep up the good work.
    Best,
    Linh.

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