• Chữa bài IELTS Task 2

    • NghiaLe

      Participant
      December 16, 2016 at 9:10 pm

      Some people think that work is the most important thing of people’s life. Without the success of career, life will become meaningless. To what extent do you agree or disagree.
      There is no doubt that the job plays an important role in our life. However, I totally disagree with those arguing that career path is the sole factor on creating a meaningful life due to valuable other ones, as will now be explained.
      To begin with, life is not enjoyable without health, no matter how success you are. Suffering health problem seems to be an obstacle hindering people to do what they truly want, such as spending time with their family or even working. For example, Cristiano Ronaldo, a prominent football players cried during the match when could not dedicate continuous to their team because of the injury. Therefore, being health should be never overlooked when pursuing any other aim.
      Furthermore, in many cases, people, especially those doing strenuous manual labours may not achieve job satisfaction but still feeling happy. To be more precise, in their perspective, work is no more than a way to feed themselves and their family. Otherwise, they find personal happiness in chatting with their friends or taking care of their children which means that besides the work, many contributing factors like a family, hobbies, and friendships are also important.
      On the other hand, the opposite view argues that successful career, followed by the sufficient finance allows people to live the way what they want. However, if people immerse in their work constantly, they tend to be mechanized and such life will become meaningless.
      In conclusion, I firmly hold my view that success of career should be not value as the only way to live meaningfully.

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      December 18, 2016 at 2:52 am

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