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    Vo Thi Anh Tuyet

    [23:45:50 3/8/2018] Cám ơn các bạn!


    Countries are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world.
    Do you think this is a positive or negative development (writing task 2, test 3, Cambridge 10)

    While countries are growing similar in the aspect that their citizens can purchase same products at any places worldwide, this trend has both advantages and disadvantages that will be articulated in this essay.
    On the one hand, the ability to buy the same kinds of products at anywhere in this planet is quite advantageous for the customers regardless of their nationalities. First and foremost, we are living in the “flat world” which means that our living standards and our life are far more facilitated by the great achievements in technology that enable us to communicate, to do business or to do shopping without going to anywhere else. For example, you can buy a high-quality electronic device or an up-to-date piece of fashionable clothes just by clicking your mouse on or without transport fees. Besides, the international enterprises will abundant staff and advanced technology will meet utmost the requirements from the worldwide customers, that helps to guarantee the buyers’ rights.
    On the other hand, this trend results in a very high competitiveness among the companies worldwide. It is obvious that the purchasers are more likely to buy the qualified, cheap products from famous brands that lead to harsh competition among sellers and enterprises when small-scale companies in weak-economic countries will slum down. For example, the agricultural products of weaker economy countries or developing countries has little chance to be exported to foreign countries because of the protective policy, the price, the custom barriers or even technological requirements from developed ones.
    In conclusion, as everything has two sides and so does the aforementioned tendency when the ability of buying same products worldwide can results both advantages and disadvantages.

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