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    Kim Phụng

    IELTS TEST 06/01/2018 – WRITING TASK 2
    Some people think that it is more beneficial to take part in sports which are play in teams, like football. While other people think that taking part in individual sports is better, like tennis or swimming. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

    There are many different opinions on the issue of whether or not playing some kind of team sports namely football brings more benefits than playing sports which are taken part in individual such as tennis or swimming. In my opinion, both kinds of sports have particular benefits. (47 words)
    On the one hand, people often argue that sports played in teams, like soccer might bring more benefits. First and foremost, playing these sports is a good way to release stress. These sports need to create two teams in order to compete with each other and every teams has some members. As a result, people can make new relationships with their team members or competitive teams. Furthermore, they can go to the coffee shop after taking part in times and increase their connection. Another point to take into account is that those are sports which improve teamwork skills. Every members in the team can learn how to connect with others in your team and acts follow the training of the coach. One member plays reasonably, his team will lose. (128 words)
    On the other hand, it is believed by some people that taking part in individual sports, like tennis or swimming has more benefits than the others. Firstly, these kinds can be taken part in by one or two persons. It is clear that people can go swimming by themselves and playing tennis needs only two ones to compete. This mean people can join their practice without depending on everyone’s schedule else. The last point to mention is that taking part in those sports do not need the coach and the connection with other members in your team. (97 words)
    In conclusion, except heathy benefits which are brought by two mentioned kinds of sports, there are many different advantages. And deciding what sports you want to take part in depends on your schedule and relationships. (35 word)
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