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    it is more important to spend public money on promoting a healthy lifestyle in order to prevent illness than to spend it on treatment of people who are already ill. To what extent do you agree of disagree?
    Recently, the rate of death due to deathly deceases such as cancer, has increasing significantly. Hence Some people argue that state budget should be allocated on preventing sickness by orienting citizens toward living a healthy way of living rather than spend on curing methods for illness patients. I totally disagree with this notion.
    On the one hand, unhealthy way of living is considered as a main cause for the increase of fatal deceases. For example, people who have the smoking habit are more likely to get lung cancer than those who do not smoke. Hence, government’s budget spending on educating people about a healthy lifestyle may bring some advantages to society. Throughout the educational programs on television, people would gain the awareness about protecting their help from outside factors. For instance, people who read or watch news on tv about health may stop eat junk food and change to choose to eat organic food instead. In contrast, the money that spend on medical treatment for lung cancer, or liver cancer can cost state budget up to millions of dollars, it may be an enormous financial burden for developing countries.
    On the other hand, even though, the cost for medical treatment can cost a great number of money for state budget, government should not neglect on taking care those patients who already got sick. For particularly, improving hospital infrastructure, and enhancing equipment for medical purpose should be put on the primary task of government. Besides that, financial aid for those people who are living underpaid but got fatal sickness is a moral duty of governments.
    In conclusion, even though raising public awareness about the important role of healthy lifestyle, government should not abandon their obligation on taking care of those who already got sick.

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    [5/1/2018, 10:46:06 PM] Cám ơn các bạn!

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