• Chữa bài IELTS Task 1

    diemlinh updated 7 years ago 2 Members · 3 Posts
    • Hana

      Participant
      March 23, 2017 at 11:00 pm

      IELTS WRITING TASK 1
      You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
      The graph below compares the changes in the birth rates of China and the
      USA between 1920 and 2000.
      Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and
      make comparisons where relevant.
      Write at least 150 words.
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      The graph indicates the proportion of births in China and the USA with the
      similar period: from 1920 to 2000.

      Overview, it is clear that it had a fluctuation and general decrease in
      both countries. Most of the period, the birth rates in the USA is higher
      than China.

      In the USA, the figure dropped significantly from 12% in 1920 to 5% in
      1945. However, there was a sudden jump to 1950 – the peak of the figure:
      15%. But then, the birth rates in the USA continue went down steadily,
      about 7% in 2000.

      In China, proportion of births fluctuated slightly between 10% (1920) and
      15% (1935). Later, there was a fell sharply to 5% during 1940s and this is
      the lowest stage of the figure. But after that, the birth rates went up
      dramatically to 20% in 1950. Finally, the figure went down rapidly to
      arround 2-3% in 2000.

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    • diemlinh

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      March 25, 2017 at 10:38 am

      [3/25/2017, 10:38:33 AM] Cám ơn các bạn!

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    • diemlinh

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      March 25, 2017 at 10:39 am

      Kindly check. Feel free to leave your questions. Thanks!

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