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Many museums and historical sites are mainly visited by tourists but not local

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    Many museums and historical sites are mainly visited by tourists but not local people. Why is the case and what can be done to attract more local people to visit this place?

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    I have edited your writing. Please read my comments thoroughly and feel free to feedback. Thanks!

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