Chữa bài IELTS Task 2
The mass media, including television, radio and newspapers, have great
influence in shaping people’s ideas. To what extent do you agree or
disagree with this statement?It is true that forming human beings’ minds have greatly affected by the
media such as television, radio and newspapers. In my perspectives, I
partly agree with this opinions.On the one hand, some people suppose that the invention of media changes
ideas of human kinds. Firstly, The media is by far the most common tool to
provide a huge source of information, which is cappable of convey knowledge
to any places of the country from plain areas to remote ones. The knowledge
are absored viewers’ ideas or readers’ cognition day to day, thus it would
allow those people to have deep understanding what ‘s happening in the
world and broaden one’ hosizons. Accoding to a reseach conducted by
political univesity suggested that, for example, thanks to the media, the
number of grandstand in rural areas of northern Vietnam significantly drop
by 30%, especially, million of enthnic individuals living in border areas,
have not exposed to dangerous situations such as enticement of treasons.
Secondly, by accessing kid channels and useful catoons, which difinitely
changes awarness of children about what are good things and bad ones. For
instance, Kinh Hong channel helps children learn how to show their
gratitude to one’s parents, and support one’s grandparents grow plants.On the other hand, using the media seems to not affect one’s inclination of
several persons. Firstly, there are a huge amount of information on the
media and multi-dimensional opinions, it would be difficult to classify
whether those data are true or fake as well as what things they should
believe. Therefore, they have tendency to listen and watch the media just
for fun instead of searching for information. For example, A reaseach of
Harvard suggested that there are 20 % of American citizents quiting
television. Secondly, a few people are extremely busy to catch up on
their work, even spending 16 hours per day on working, thus rest of their
schedule is to fall sleep in order to recharge their battery after a long
hard work.In conclusion, it seems to me that the affect of the media is great.
However, another group of individuals believes that their ideas are not
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