• Chữa bài IELTS Task 2

    • phanthuhaneu57

      Participant
      April 17, 2018 at 8:32 pm

      The mass media, including television, radio and newspapers, have great
      influence in shaping people’s ideas. To what extent do you agree or
      disagree with this statement?

      It is true that forming human beings’ minds have greatly affected by the
      media such as television, radio and newspapers. In my perspectives, I
      partly agree with this opinions.

      On the one hand, some people suppose that the invention of media changes
      ideas of human kinds. Firstly, The media is by far the most common tool to
      provide a huge source of information, which is cappable of convey knowledge
      to any places of the country from plain areas to remote ones. The knowledge
      are absored viewers’ ideas or readers’ cognition day to day, thus it would
      allow those people to have deep understanding what ‘s happening in the
      world and broaden one’ hosizons. Accoding to a reseach conducted by
      political univesity suggested that, for example, thanks to the media, the
      number of grandstand in rural areas of northern Vietnam significantly drop
      by 30%, especially, million of enthnic individuals living in border areas,
      have not exposed to dangerous situations such as enticement of treasons.
      Secondly, by accessing kid channels and useful catoons, which difinitely
      changes awarness of children about what are good things and bad ones. For
      instance, Kinh Hong channel helps children learn how to show their
      gratitude to one’s parents, and support one’s grandparents grow plants.

      On the other hand, using the media seems to not affect one’s inclination of
      several persons. Firstly, there are a huge amount of information on the
      media and multi-dimensional opinions, it would be difficult to classify
      whether those data are true or fake as well as what things they should
      believe. Therefore, they have tendency to listen and watch the media just
      for fun instead of searching for information. For example, A reaseach of
      Harvard suggested that there are 20 % of American citizents quiting
      television. Secondly, a few people are extremely busy to catch up on
      their work, even spending 16 hours per day on working, thus rest of their
      schedule is to fall sleep in order to recharge their battery after a long
      hard work.

      In conclusion, it seems to me that the affect of the media is great.
      However, another group of individuals believes that their ideas are not
      controled by the mass media.

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    • Hien Nguyen Thi Thu

      Participant
      April 18, 2018 at 11:48 pm

      Thank you very much! Here is your corrected essay!

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      • phanthuhaneu57

        Participant
        April 19, 2018 at 7:57 am

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