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Nowadays a large amount of advertising aiming at children should be banned becau

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    Nowadays a large amount of advertising aiming at children should be banned because of the negative effects. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

    Today , children become commercial target of many advertisers and many people believe that activity of advertisers should be banned because it harm children . Personally , I agree with this idea due to some reasons .
    First of all , many advertisements were created and exaggerated by advertisers . Its make children who is naive and inexperienced have a illusion about products . Furthermore , children will try to persuade their parents to buy these products although these products aren’t as good as they think and it’s waste of money . For example , exaggeration of products make people believe that these products are very good as well as price of these products increase extremely . As a result , people spend too much money to buy them although they aren’t worthwhile .
    However , choosing children as target market of advertisers has brought some benefit and useful information . It help parents of children can choose products which are suitable for their children . In addition , people can distinguish between real and fake products . For instance , they can avoid negative effects of fake products thank to useful information advertisements provide .
    In conclusion , many people think that choosing children as target market is more harm than good and I totally agree with their opinions .

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    [2/13/2018, 10:54:37 PM] Cám ơn các bạn!

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