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    Đan Thư Katharine
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    The only way to improve the safety of our roads is to give much stricter
    punishments on driving offenses. Do you agree or disagree?

    Nowadays the more society developed, the more crowded cities become. As a
    result, traffic turns out to be one of the most serious problems at many
    urban areas. While some argue that there are many solutions for this
    question, I believe that promulgate heavier traffic laws would be the best
    choice to make the roads safer.
    People always find it easier to get into orders and disciplines with the
    force of laws, as they are always afraid of the punishments for doing
    against the laws. It is evident that the harder the punishment are, the
    more people would follow the rules while the are on the road. In developed
    countries, the fine for driving against the laws is much stricter than that
    of underdeveloped and developing countries, which are facing with the
    increase in accidents rate everyday.
    On the other hand, the fine for driving against traffic laws can be used
    for many purposes which may be beneficial for those who usually use the
    traffic. The fee which is paid by the citizens to build the roads can
    decline by using those fine instead. With those who often use the traffic,
    this can help them save up a huge amount of money and feel more comfortable
    that people who always follow the rules are awarded for their good
    behaviours. 
    In conclusion, although some claim that increasing the punishment for
    breaking the traffic rules are unnecessary and inhumane, I believe that the
    most beneficial and fastest way to improve the safety of traffic in urban
    areas which attract migrant workers worldwide.

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  • #172854

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    Cảm ơn bạn đã gửi bài!
    Có thắc mắc nào cứ hỏi nha bạn :”)

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