Chữa bài IELTS Task 2
1. Nowadays a large of amount of advertising aiming at children should be banned because of effects.
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1. Nowadays a large of amount of advertising aiming at children should be banned because of effects.
A great number of youngsters are affected by advertisements, so some people supposed that they should be banned. I agree that some advertisements are not good for children, but I believe that others can be helpful for their knowledge a lot.
On the one hand, there are a few reasons why advertisement effects terribly to children. The first reason is that there are lots of violent and sexual advertisement are broadcasted widely on televisions and the Internet. It is not difficult for children to find and watch them anytime and anywhere, then they are likely to tend to bully their friends at schools as bad behavior on these advertisement. Furthermore, watching advertisement on TV a lot makes them face to danger in eyes diseases and obesity. If a child watch advertisement on TV everyday, he can easily to be more prone of obesity.
On the other hand, some people thought that advertisements can improve their knowledge. Firstly, good advertisement allows them draw inspiration and push their imagination. For example, the colorful animations and fantasy characters on Fristi milk advertisement helps children be more creative and have new ideas in their real life. Secondly, children can broaden their knowledge from amazing advertisements. A saving electric bulb advertisement will provide them information about how to save electricity and choose good furniture for their house.
In conclusion, it is certainly true that people should not allow negative advertisement for children. The good advertisement should be encouraged to broadcast in order to improve them.Attachments:
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