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part 2- describe a famous person in your country

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    [3/24/2018, 9:11:43 PM] Cám ơn các bạn!

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    The celebrity whom I would like to meet in person is definitely David Bekham. David was a professional English footballer who played for the world’s most renowned football clubs such as Manchester United and Real Madrid. He was named in the list of 100 greatest living football players of FIFA back in 2004.

    Besides his career as a sportsman, David is also famous for his marriage to Victoria Beckham, an equally successful model, singer and fashion designer, with four children. This has been considered one of the happiest celebrity marriages and partnerships.

    David Beckham is my biggest idol not only because of his legendary football skills but also because he is very modest and kind as a person. He was seen offering a hand to a photographer who fell while trying to photograph him. Also, according to his wife, David Beckham is a devoted husband and father who always puts his family first.

    If I ever had a chance, I would take David Beckham to my favorite restaurants in Hanoi and introduce Vietnamese food to him. Of course I would take pictures with him too, to post on my facebook wall but the most important thing would be for me to talk with him, learn from him and be inspired by this man.

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    [3/26/2018, 8:15:52 AM] Cám ơn các bạn!

  • #175324

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    part 2-describe a famous person in your country

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    Part 2: Describe a famous person in your country

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    part 2- describe a famous person in your country
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    part 2- describe a famous person in your country

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    Discribe a sport star

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    em cảm ơn page có thêm bài gợi ý cho em ạ.
    nhưng page cho em hỏi em có được chữa bài theo kiểu nhu này k ạ?
    “. Grammatical range and accuracy
    – Có thể sử dụng một số cấu trúc phức tạp trong bài nói, tuy nhiên cần chú ý về cách sắp xếp câu để diễn đạt rõ ràng hơn
    – Lỗi:
    + an essential change in my local area, which is environmental law -> a new environmental law, which has immensely improved my local area
    + one of the most important change -> X
    + firstly because -> the first reason is
    + secondly because -> another reason is

    3. Lexical resource
    – Vốn từ của bạn còn hạn chế, các từ vựng sử dụng còn khá cơ bản
    – Một số từ dùng lặp lại và nên thay bằng cách diễn đạt khác như change, important
    – Lỗi:
    + environmental law -> a new environmental law
    + important change -> a significant change”

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