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people going to cinema bar chart

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    The bar graph illustrates the proportion of the number of people who when to cinemas on different days during 4 years in European country.
    It can be noticeable that the percentage of people went to watch movie at the weekend was far higher than those at the beginning. The year that had by far highest figure was 2007.
    From Monday to Tuesday, all of these proportions were under 20%. On Monday, nearly 15% of people going to the cinema in 2005, about 3% and 5 % higher than the proportion in 2007 and in 2003 respectively. On Tuesday, 2003 was the year had the highest level, at 20%. On the next day, these figures decreased gradually, from 16% to under 10%. On the following day, the rate quite fluatuated, at about 18% than felt to 13% and rose quickly to nearly 20% over 4 years.
    Between Friday and Sunday, Saturday was the day attracted a lot of people went to the cinema, in the year of 2007, the figure reached its peak at 45%.

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