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    Some people think that the best way to reduce crime is to give longer prison sentences. Others, however, believe there are better alternative ways of reducing crime. Discuss both views and give your opinion

    People have different viewpoints about reducing crime. While some people suppose that giving longer prison sentences is the optimal option to deal with crime commitment, others think that there are still other effective ways.
    On the one hand, longer prison sentences have a number of benefits. Firstly, it will warn people from breaking the rules in terms of making them scared of the heavy punishment that they will receive if they do things wrong. Secondly, longer prison sentences prevent the crime violators of committing the crime again in the future because they will spend their whole lives in prison if they try to violate the laws again. The last but not least, prison sentences symbolize for a kind of punishment that presents intolerance towards breaking behaviors to criminals and take away the freedom which is the basic human right of the criminals, that will make them stay alert to any evil thoughts or actions.
    On the other hand, there are still other alternatives in tackling with crime. The first option is that teaching ethical issues and its examples in schools, that instills the goodness and correct behaviors in children who will become good citizens in future. The other effective alternative is that there should be a close combination between families, schools and societies through a comprehensive curriculum that help students differentiate between the good and the bad and nourish their self-esteem and self-confidence. I strongly support the afore-mentioned idea representing that educating a person needs to be done from the firm foundation particularly at schools, just as planting a big tree should be done from its root.
    In conclusion, there is a variety of opinions about how to reduce crime, while longer prison sentences has its certain benefits, the others alternatives as mentioned above are also effective.

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    [15:24:08 27/4/2018] Cám ơn các bạn!

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    [4/28/2018, 10:34:09 PM] Cám ơn các bạn!

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    In many parts of the world today, there is a profitable market for products which lighten or whiten people’s skin. Outline the reasons for using such products and discuss what effects they have in terms of health and society

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