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[17:32:28, 16/5/2018] Cám ơn các bạn!
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Actually, I do think people still use “potential” as a noun in the sense of “ability,” so it is not necessary to use “potency” as you suggest. It sounds very weird
I did Google for the terms and it turns out “financial potential” was more widely used than “financial potency”. Thanks for your comment :)
Anyway, you should use “a greater financial potential” (missing article “a”), Please as well add this correction in your work
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