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Sharing information freely or chargeably_Cam 12 test 5 task 2

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    Assignment (Cam 12, test5, task2):
    Some people believe that it is good to share as much as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Other believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely.
    Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
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    The sharing of information has never been as popular as it is these days. It can be shared through social networks, media, forums and so on. Some persons claim that the free of charge sharing should be highly supported especially in scientific research, business and the academic world. Nevertheless, others are convinced that this action need to be charged because of the information’s significance and value. This essay will discuss these both points of view and present my own opinion.
    Regarding the as much as possible information sharing is encouraged, there is reason why people hold a belief for this. They would like our world to be better. After the completion of information transferring, the information gap between the group who possesses a great deal of this and the group who has limited exposure to this is bridged. Based on the knowledge received, the receivers are able to apply directly or indirectly to their lives in order to improve them. To give an instance, the methods to prevent dangerous diseases such as cancer, AIDS are so useful for inhabitants in rural areas because they are virtually not able to bear costs of hospital treatments.
    I am in favor of the opinion that the information sharing should be charged. Specifically, the valuable information such as research, entrepreneur management ways and lectures of scientists, businessmen and professors respectively must be copyrighted for a fixed number of years in order to repect the owners’ labor and intellectual investment. The achievements can only be shared after the end of that period of time and at deserved charges so that the investors can cover their own investment. For example, Montessori measure – a progress in chidlren education – is characterized by an emphasis on their independence, psychological and social development. This method is too valuable to be transferred without any charge.
    In conclusion, the sharing in scientific research, business and the academic world is greatly appreciated, but nonetheless this action should just take place as long as the owners’ acceptance for publicity and a suggested fee (if any).

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