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    10.1 Nowadays many young people spend their free time in shopping centers. This has a negative effect on the youths and the society. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give your opinion and relevant examples.
    One of the prevalent hobbies among the young is going shopping. While some people refute that the trend has its adverse impact on social development, the others agree that this phenomenon has some advantages. From my perspective, I totally believe that the hobby has both merits and demerits, however, its demerits overshadow its merits.
    On the one hand, in terms of economy, visiting shopping malls has a positive effect on national economic development. To be specific, the occasions are valuable chances for sellers to introduce their appealing products, and in return, youngsters can directly experience them. Therefore, this is conducive to consuming promotion as well as revenue increase for enterprises. As a result, the state economic statistics will witness a significant rise.
    On the other hand, there is a sheer volume of the trend’s disadvantages. Firstly, obviously, the way of using time shows that young generations spend too much time on their own interest instead of caring about social issues. When they have free time, it is better if they devote time and money to do donors and take part in relief organizations. Besides, the meaningful supports from each individual can help disadvantaged people get rid of their burdens in their lives. Secondly, living in such an ever-increasing world, instead of wasting time in department stores, seniors should try their utmost to keep up with the cutting-edge technology and academic knowledge. It is clear that themselves education is good for their own to develop their professional fields and reach the zenith of their careers.
    In conclusion, in my opinion, despite the national financial benefit, the youths should spend fewer hours on shopping and invest their time and finance in charity and education.

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    [09:29:57, 14/3/2018] Cám ơn các bạn!

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