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    Some people believe government should spend money on building train and subway lines to reduce traffic congestion. Others think that building more and wider roads is better way to reduce traffic congestion. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

    There are many ways to decrease jams arrange from changing closed time to upgrade the infrastructure. However, there is still a debatable issue that the authority should build modern transports or enlarge the streets. Actually both of them have pros and cons in several cases.
    In the first point view, It’s true that highly technological transportation is better and much more modern than current vehicles (buses, cars, motorbikes, etc.) on purpose to reduce the congestion. Firstly, it is faster because it has stronger motors and it runs on its own way also. A subway’s speed ,for instance, can reach 100 km/h whereas a bus’s speed can reach maximum 30 km/h in urban region and about 50 km/h in countryside. Secondly, It’s important to realize that subways are built under the ground and train are constructed above the land, so it absolutely will lessen the area of public transportation.
    In the second place, Although advanced motors give us lots of value, there are still some disadvantages. On the one hand, because of their expensive price, the government must borrow money from ODA. This issue will kick the personal duty to a higher range than it before such as from 8 percent to 10 percent in 2013. On the other hand, the authority have to invite professionals yearly to maintain or fix these systems and it will cost a lot of amount of money for this one. The reason for it is because only foreigners who graduated abroad can understand this system, especially where we imported it.
    In my view, to round off, It’s the best choice for the government to upgrade transportation infrastructures by add new quick and high – tech transports. Therefore the road will less vehicles and obviously cut down the traffic jams.

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