• Chữa bài IELTS Task 2

    • May May

      Participant
      January 23, 2017 at 5:33 pm

      Some people think that criminals should not be imprisoned. Instead, education and job training should replace a former to deal with criminals. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

      In this comtemporary society, our world has witnessed an increase in number of criminal rate surrounding us. There is numerous solutions to tackle with criminals and I believe that education and training must be given top priority instead of taking them into jail as the most efficient method to deal with law breakers.
      To begin with, undoubtedly, people who commit crimes should be given lengthy prison sentences and this action is supposed to bring out detrimental effects more than its benefits. For instance, after being released from jails, these group have a tendency to take vengeance which is extremely harmful for society and they are believed to return to be law-offenders again just after a quite short period. There is undeniable that there is a wide range of punishment and prision sentence is not the way to cut crime particulalry for young offenders, it `s completely violent. To put a curb on this matter, government should offer them opportunities to correct their previous mistakes and to perfect themselves in a better environment. Community service is one of the most effective forms to educate these criminals and needless to day, they are in need of being fully aware that what they did is totally unlawful. Moreover, activities of community service enable them to share and support others as a great contribution to social development.
      To conclude, imprisoning offenders does not seem to be the solution to deal with criminals. Therefore, I agree that providing them a suitable way of education and training will be the comprehensive one to apply.

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    • trucquynhnm

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      January 24, 2017 at 1:09 am

      Feedback của bạn. Keep up the hard work!

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