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    The best way to solve world’s environmental problem is increase the cost of fuel.
    Do you agree or disagree and give your own opinion?

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    The best way to solve world’s environmental problem is increase the cost of
    fuel.

    Do you agree or disagree and give your own opinion?

    It is argued that raising the fuel expense is the most effective method to
    tackle the environmental issues. On my perspective, even though this
    measure could bring about some certain advantages, however, it is not the
    best practice to solve the problem.

    On the one hand, higher cost of petrol could possibly lower the demand for
    private means of transportation and boost the use of public transport as an
    alterative way to travel. This, certainly, would lead to less emission of
    exhaust gases, which are the major cause of the greenhouse effect, into the
    atmosphere. However, as fuel is a vital input for various products, any
    rise in this expenditure would exert multiple impacts on the cost of goods
    sold to the public. For example, the oil crisis in 1970s triggered the
    hyper-inflation globally, then the recession in all developed countries
    during that decade.

    On the other hand, I believe the government, through financial subsidy to
    encourage the consumption of alternative sources of energy, could
    effectively resolve the environmental problems with minimal negative side
    effects on the society. For example, in Norway, electric cars have been
    used as the dominant vehicles of the locals due to generous subsidy
    programs of the government, and this virtually eliminates the air pollution
    in urban areas of this country. Another method to propose is the
    sponsorship by public funds in researches to lower the cost of alternative
    energy. As a matter of fact, various renewable energies have been
    introduced such as solar or wind energy, but their drawback of high cost
    still prevents customers from consuming these types of clean power.

    In conclusion, although increase fuel cost could bring some positive
    impacts, the encouragement of using clean energy would be a better way to
    solve the environmental problems.

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    Overall, you did a very great job. Keep up the good work!
    Best,
    Linh.

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