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table – the amount of money giving to developing countries

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  • #189515
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    kemvani96
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    [20:34:57, 14/5/2018] Cám ơn các bạn!

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  • #189909

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    Please kindly check!

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  • #190072

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    Dear bạn,
    Nếu bạn có vấn đề gì thắc mắc về bài chữa, bạn có thể nói cho mình biết được không?
    Mong nhận được ý kiến từ bạn

    Best regards :)

  • #190227

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    dưới đây là comment của học viên về bài chữa:
    Mong các bạn có tâm hơn khi chữa bài, chứ không phải chữa cho có là được. VD: 1. there IS a considerable rise in the quantity of money given by the USA, from 9.8 to 17 million of dollars which maintained at the highest level among three categories between 2006 and 2008. => WAS(bạn chữa bài cho mình không chữa lỗi sai chỗ này) 2. in 2009, the amount of money which those countries supplied to developing countries all gently diminished before mounting significantly in 2010 with the biggest numbers being generated by the USA which IS 20.3 million of dollars. => WAS (cũng không chữa lỗi sai ở chỗ này luôn).

  • #190519

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    Dear kemvani96,
    I am so sorry for the careless correction. Here is your essay, after reviewing for the second time.

    Best regards

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