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Talents are innate or can be taught to become_Cam 7, test 1, task 2

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    Cam 7, test 1, task 2:
    It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents,
    for instance for sport or music, and others are not. However, it is
    sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports
    person or musician.
    Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

    Answer:
    From sports and musicial competitions, it is easily to find out individuals
    with more outstanding abilities in comparison with others. Such individuals
    can be called talents. There is controversial topic of whether talents are
    innate ability of only some persons or any children can be taught to become
    talent. This essay will examine both sides of this topic and present my
    personal perspective.

    To support for the concept that talents are innate and of just some
    persons, not all, there is a statement about this. The special abilities of
    some persons emerge when they were children, had not attended any classes
    yet or just attended some classes of basic knowledge in their fields. For
    instance, Bui Cong Duy – a proudful Vietnamese violinist – showed off his
    talent when he was just four, after some basic lessons of his father. Duy
    could play with his passion and heart of a child at that time. He has been
    living in the melodies of violin from his childhood till present.

    On the other hand, the possibility of nurturing a child to become a high-
    rated athelete or musician is true. Firstly, children are inspired to show
    off their special abilities by their coach or teacher. Second, they have to
    follow a strict and long-term training program. For instance, in China,
    there are lots of classes built for nurturing children to become good
    artists. To take music class as an example, teacher let their pupils to
    experience lots of musical instruments such as piano, string instruments,
    drum with their own comfort. Based on observation and listening, teacher
    will find out which instrument is the best for their pupils. They then
    create a ten-to-fifteen-year teaching plan for each pupil. I do favour in
    this side of argument.

    In conclusion, talents are not only natured but also nurtured. In case of
    nurture, an appropriate training program plays an important role in
    coaching a child to become a good sports person or musician. This coaching
    brings more excellent persons to society beside innate talents.

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    [4/17/2018, 2:43:46 PM] Cám ơn các bạn!

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  • #183872

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    thanks so much, I will read and feedback (if any).

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