April 16, 2018 at 10:14 am #181986
Phan Thi Diem PhucParticipant
Cam 7, test 1, task 2:
It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents,
for instance for sport or music, and others are not. However, it is
sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports
person or musician.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
From sports and musicial competitions, it is easily to find out individuals
with more outstanding abilities in comparison with others. Such individuals
can be called talents. There is controversial topic of whether talents are
innate ability of only some persons or any children can be taught to become
talent. This essay will examine both sides of this topic and present my
To support for the concept that talents are innate and of just some
persons, not all, there is a statement about this. The special abilities of
some persons emerge when they were children, had not attended any classes
yet or just attended some classes of basic knowledge in their fields. For
instance, Bui Cong Duy – a proudful Vietnamese violinist – showed off his
talent when he was just four, after some basic lessons of his father. Duy
could play with his passion and heart of a child at that time. He has been
living in the melodies of violin from his childhood till present.
On the other hand, the possibility of nurturing a child to become a high-
rated athelete or musician is true. Firstly, children are inspired to show
off their special abilities by their coach or teacher. Second, they have to
follow a strict and long-term training program. For instance, in China,
there are lots of classes built for nurturing children to become good
artists. To take music class as an example, teacher let their pupils to
experience lots of musical instruments such as piano, string instruments,
drum with their own comfort. Based on observation and listening, teacher
will find out which instrument is the best for their pupils. They then
create a ten-to-fifteen-year teaching plan for each pupil. I do favour in
this side of argument.
In conclusion, talents are not only natured but also nurtured. In case of
nurture, an appropriate training program plays an important role in
coaching a child to become a good sports person or musician. This coaching
brings more excellent persons to society beside innate talents.
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April 23, 2018 at 11:33 am #183872
thanks so much, I will read and feedback (if any).
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