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Task 1 (Line graph) Compares changes in the birth rates of China and the USA

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    Task 1: The graph below compares changes in the birth rates of China and
    the USA between 1920 and 2000.

    Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and
    make comparisons where relevant.

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    Write at least 150 words

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    The graph shows data on the rate of fertilizing in China and US from 1920
    to 2000. Overall, there was a downward trend of this rate in two countries
    over the period.

    It can be seen that the rate of US had a fluctuation on 20 years before
    reaching the lowest point at 5% in 1945. However, there was a recovery of
    birth rate of US in 1950 when this rate increased sharply to 15%. And
    finally, from 1950 to 2000, the percentage of birth had a steady decline
    from 15% to about 7.5%.

    For the rate of birth in China, the trend of the change was as same as that
    in US. It started with a variation from 1920 and then fell down to 5% in
    1945. However, , the recovery’s percentage of birth was 20% in 1950,
    highest on the whole period. After 1950, the rate in China fell more
    dramatically and quickly than that in US when decreasing from 20% to 2.5%.

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    [3/12/2018, 11:56:49 PM] Cám ơn các bạn!

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    Kindly check!

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