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task 1 – pie chart Thanks a lot

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    [21:51:07, 12/7/2018] Cám ơn các bạn!

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    The pie chart above compares the percentage of five means of transport that
    people chose to move to one university between 2004 to 2009.

    It is clear that, the amount of people who use car as transport travelling
    witnessed a significant decrease. Meanwhile, the figure for bus and bicycle
    rose considerably during the examined years

    At the beginning of time, the allocation of car travelling account for more
    than half of total. The number had considerably declined to over a quarter
    by 2009. People who use Train as well as walking to moved experienced a
    modest increase from 3% and 4% in 2004 to 4% and 6% in 2009, respectively.

    In 2008, Bus was the secondary common of traffic in this university with a
    third of total. This proportion increased considerably to 46% and became
    the highest choice of means travelling in 2009. The similar trend could be
    seen from the percentage of bicycle method which went up merely double
    from 9% in 2004 to 16% in the end of period.

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