• Chữa Writing 911

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    • Đinh

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      August 31, 2017 at 11:58 pm

      The provided tables compare the data given for how much money spent on Fair-trade coffee and bananas in five different Europe countries in two particular periods (1999; 2004). Unit is measured in millions of euros.
      Overall, it can be clearly seen that the United Kingdom saw by far the highest value of consuming bananas throughout the period shown. Notably, there was a positive trend in sales of fair-traded coffee in all five nations, whereas only three out of five regions witnessed an upward tendency in that of bananas.
      As is presented, of all five studied countries, consumer spending on coffee was noticeably higher in Switzerland, at 3 millions, which was twice as much as UK (3 and 1.5 respectively). Over the following five years, the figures for UK increased significantly by 18.5, peaking at 20 at the end of given time. Similarly, revenue from Fair-trade bananas was highest in the UK, at 15 in earlier year. Subsequently, there was a dramatic upsurge in the money spending on this item in the UK by 32, which was about 8 times more than that of Switzerland.
      On the other hand, the percentage for three remained countries was far lower than two top leading nations. It is obvious shown on the table that sales of coffee increased slightly to more and less 2 in all three. Noticeably, revenue from bananas in Belgium and Sweden declined from 1.8 to 1 millions and 2 to 0.9 millions respectively.

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    • ivynguyen

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      September 4, 2017 at 6:27 pm

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    • Đinh

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      September 5, 2017 at 9:09 pm

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    • ivynguyen

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      September 6, 2017 at 10:36 am

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