• Chữa bài IELTS Task 1

    • nguyenthanhnga.23597

      Participant
      October 9, 2017 at 9:39 pm

      Task 1: The graph below shows UK acid rain emissions, measured in millions of tones, from four different sectors between 1990 and 2007

      The line graph illustrates four different sectors leading to UK acid rain emissions from 1990 to 2007
      It can be seen from the graph that there was a reduction in the amount of acid rain emissions in four sectors. Also, the emission on electricity, gas, water supply; other industries and domestic decreased, while the figure for transport and communication fluctuated slightly
      In 1991, the highest amount of emissions- 3.3 millions of tones was recorded in the sector of electricity, gas and water supply. This compared with figures of 2.1; 0.7; 0.6 for other industries, transport and communication, respectively
      In the period between 1991 and 2007, UK witnessed a significant decline to 0.5 millions of tones in the sector of electricity, gas and water supply. By contrast, there was a slight increase in the amount of emissions from transport and communication from 2001 to 2005.

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    • vchinh.tr

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      October 13, 2017 at 1:45 am

      Please find my feedback below

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    • nguyenthanhnga.23597

      Participant
      October 13, 2017 at 2:55 pm

      Mình cảm ơn ad nhiều!!!
      Đây là lần đầu tiên mình viết task 1 nên còn rất nhiều thiếu sót. Mình sẽ cố gắng nhiều hơn nữa trong các bài viết sau

    • Nguyễn Quang

      Participant
      October 13, 2017 at 9:19 pm

      the amount of emissions or the amount of emission ? emission means a process or a substance?
      Thank for your answer in advance

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