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    Some people think that family life and parents have great influence on children’s development, while others consider that external influence plays a more important role in children’s life, discuss both views and give your own opinion.

    People have different views about whether parenting or factors from outdoor life plays an integral part in the growth of children. While external world can affect kids positively, I believe that the influence of family and parents is more significant.
    On the one hand, external factors can benefit children in some ways. With the progress of information technology, students today can easily access numberous sources of knowledge. When they turn on computer, there are a variety of educational programmes and courses that will help them learn more about different areas such as language, culture or history. Besides, more and more children are given chances to develop their social skills and obtain valuable experience through various outside activities. While many children take chance to travel to distant locations with a view to discovering new things, others choose to join in volunteer groups, sport clubs and organizations devoting to society.
    On the other hand, there are some reasons why family life and parents are more important to children’s development than anything else. First, as kids tend to imitate what their parents do, parental education influences greatly on children’s personality. In reality, the way children behave, communicate and face with any problem around them is in relation to their upbringing at home. Second, before all kids attend school, parents are their first teacher.Children of early ages spend more time with their mom and dad than anyone else. For example, if a child lives in a family with a strict parenting style, he is prone to submit to discipline and show low self-esteem.
    In conclusion, I acknowledge that outside influences may be beneficial for children, but it seems to me that family and parents are much more important for their long term of development.

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    excellent job
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