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    Topic: Although more and more people read the news on the Internet, newspaper will remain the most important source of news for the majority of people. Do you agree or disagree?
    In recent years, Internet has been widely used in various areas and it has attracted millions of users. In terms of spreading information, some people argue that news will maintain its popularity among readers despite the application of the Internet. Personally, I disagree with this point of view.
    On the one hand, although newspaper contains important source of information, it possesses some drawbacks as well. In the world of technological advancement, striking news is immediately uploaded on the Internet while it takes time for newspaper to reach the customers. Updating speed is one of key elements that make newspaper less attractive than its competitor. Moreover, traditional news production is relatively costly compared to posting articles online. For example, expense for paying staffs, offices and printing papers can become a heavy burden to many newspaper publishers to maintain their work.
    On the other hand, there are many reasons why the Internet is likely to alter newspaper. Thanks to portable devices, users can experience a great sense of convenience. People at all ages can easily get access to online news only by quick steps conducted on their mobile tools. For example, utilities applied on cell phone are extremely useful for elderly to try and be updated to daily news. If it had not been for the usage of the Internet, the way of conveying messages would not have been so easily carried out.
    In conclusion, I believe that Internet will gain its popularity over newspaper in a near future. Besides, more and more readers will prefer news online because of its convenience.

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    Please find the corrected version attached and feel free to let me know if you have any question.

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