• Chữa bài IELTS Task 2

    • Hien Nguyen Thi Thu

      Participant
      June 22, 2017 at 11:34 pm

      The cost of international travel is decreasing and tourism is increasing in
      many countries. What are the advantages and disadvantages of the rising
      trend of tourism for countries?

      It is true that nowadays transnational travel is becoming
      progressively more affordable, which has driven the growth of tourism
      industry. While there exist several drawbacks from the upsurge in global
      travels, I believe they are outweighed by the substantial benefits.
      The potential impacts of this trend on individual countries are
      definite. The foremost repercussion is that the environment would be
      exacerbated. Tourists are more likely to litter in some resorts, which may
      contribute to air pollution, water contamination and land degradation. The
      construction of tourist amenities such as hotels and restaurants also
      deprive wild animals of natural habitats, which places them at risk.
      Moreover, differences in social background and cultural values may make the
      discrepancy of foreigners and locals on some issues more indelible. For
      example, Arabians often consider westerners their foes and their divergence
      seems to be inherent; therefore, they may show hostility against visitors
      from these countries.
      However, the benefits from a growing number of international tourists
      far outweigh the aforementioned drawbacks. First of all, both the locals
      and the state where global tourism is popular are economically motivated.
      It opens up opportunities for business development throughout the world
      especially tourism companies. A lot of jobs would be generated, which would
      help improve the living standards of the citizens. This is mostly
      beneficial for underdeveloped countries where people are struggling to earn
      a living. For example, Thailand, a previously impoverished country, managed
      to alleviate its poverty by focusing on tourism.
      In conclusion, the contraction in international travel has brought a
      wealth of significant benefits to the natives, rather than some drawbacks
      including environmental effects and hostile attitudes towards visitors from
      locals.

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      June 23, 2017 at 10:11 pm

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