• Chữa Writing 911

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    • phuongthy.le89

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      March 8, 2018 at 6:14 pm

      Topic: Some people say that parents should control their children’s behavior from a very young age. What do you think?

      It is true that some parents keep the point of view that small children should be managed on their ways of acting. While I accept that this may suit many parents, I believe that others will have different ways to raise-up their children.
      On the one hand, there are a variety of reasons why parents should control their children’s behavior from a very young age. One reason is that small children are easily to be affected bad habit from surrounding living environment as they cannot identified what are right things to do and just imitate from others. For example, my 3-year-old niece used to say bad words when she went to kidder garden for a short period. She did not understand what these words meant but she just imitate from her friends. Furthermore, through supervising their children’s action carefully, parents could realize unusual matters incurring with their children in the early stage. It is not too late to stop these issues get worse and guide their children to right manner.
      On the other hand, a large percentage of parents let their babies grow-up in their own way that means the children can choose what they want to do. Parents just take roles as the guidants who give advice and transfer experience for youngsters. The prominent benefit of this way is that children are independent on their parents. They can form many high quality personality such as decisive, independent character. The second advantage is that small children will have more comfortable atmosphere to develop characters and find out their own talent and what the most suitable career for them.
      In conclusion, it is certainly true that small children should be managed on their ways of acting by their parents, but it is no means that parents do not let children have chances to develop themselves in their own way.

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    • diemlinh

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      March 9, 2018 at 12:04 pm

      [3/9/2018, 12:04:21 PM] Cám ơn các bạn!

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