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Task 2: The government encourages businesses move to the rural area

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    Topic: As traffic and accommodation problems are increasing in the large cities, the
    government encourages businesses move to the rural area. Do you think the
    advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

    It is true that large cities have faced with overloaded transportation and housing issues recently therefore enterprises are persuaded to relocated to countryside. Although this may have several drawbacks, I believe that the positive effects are greater than negative ones.
    On the one hand, company owners move their business to rural regions is unbeneficial in some ways. Firstly, transport systems in remote areas have not well instructed yet so in in the first period, companies may meet difficulty in transporting material and delivering goods to customers. Secondly, enterprise have to rebuild their infrastructure in new locations, which leads to the significant increase of expenditure. Finally, building factories in rural areas, company may experience with natural disasters due to the fact that remote areas suffer anger of Mother nature more often than Central areas. This drawback will affect seriously to business’s operation activities.
    On the other hand, I would argue that these negative impacts are outweighed by positive effects. The first prominent justification is that economic as well as social development will be balanced among regions since the emergence of businesses will entail the growth of economy and society. Furthermore, traffic and accommodation overload matter in central cities will be resolved owing to the fact that inhabitants can find job in their hometown with no trouble so they do not need to rush into big cities. The overpopulation is the main reason causes the overload of traffic and accommodation. In addition, government has created many preference policies for companies which set-up in remote areas.
    In conclusion, for the reasons mentioned above, it is obvious to acknowledge the dominant benefits of this tendency, but the possible negative impact of moving companies to countryside should not be overlooked.

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    [3/13/2018, 10:34:03 PM] Cám ơn các bạn!

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    [3/15/2018, 10:08:23 AM] Cám ơn các bạn!

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