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The given pie chart illustrates the percentage of tourists’ choices of places

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    The given pie chart illustrates the percentage of tourists’ choices of places to stay in during their holiday in 1985, 1995 and 2005.

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    The given pie chart illustrates the percentage of tourists’ choices of places to stay in during their holiday in 1985, 1995 and 2005.
    It is obvious that acquaintances’ houses and hotels were the most popular vacation accommodation in the period shown. While staying with friends and relatives are less and less chosen over the period, hotels became a more favorite alternative option and some clear fluctuations were seen in the proportion of camping and caravans.
    In 1985, a major amount of people chose to stay with there relatives and friends, at 55%. Ranking at the second position, camping was another popular choice, at 19%. There were just a small number of people chose caravans, accounted for 10%.
    From that time onwards, staying with acquaintances fell sharply from 55% to 35% in 1995, which continued to decline by 5%, at 30%, in 2005. In contrast, the figure of tourists choosing hotel increased continuously during the period of two decades, from 16% to above a quarter and more than a third respectively. In comparison, a dramatically fluctuation happened with the percentage of people choosing camping, started from 19% in 1985, then reached 12% before increasing to 19% in 2005. As the caravans, its proportion increased to a quarter in 1995 then fell back to 14% in the following decade.

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    Please check the corrected version down below.

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