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the line graph compares the different classification of crimes in England

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    the line graph compares the different classification of crimes in England and Wales between 1970 and 2005

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    the line graph compares the different classification of crimes in England and Wales between 1970 and 2005
    Obviously, car theft was the highest trend among three kind of crimes in the period shown. While the number of car theft increased over that time, the latter figures for house burglary and street robbery did not change much
    In 1970, about 0.4 million in criminal cases related to car theft , doubling the figure for house burglaries. In comparison, street robbery was the least common one at that time, which was selected by only about 0.05%
    From that time onwards, car theft happened much more frequently, and its number increased exponentially to a peak of 1.7 million in 1995. This time witnessed a plunge to 1 million only. The similar trends were repeated in the quantity of house burglaries, which reached 0.5 million in 1990 and then decreased to around 0.3 million at the end of the time period. However, there was no dramatic change recorded in the frequency of street robbery at the beginning point

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    Please check the corrected version down below. Thank you.

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