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TonyK Advertising in the media is no more than a form of entertainment

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    If a product is good and can meet people’s needs, people will buy it.
    Advertising in the media is no more than a form of entertainment. Do you
    agree or disagree?

    It is true that the quality of goods is the first concern of customers and
    they will spend money on products which satisfies their requirements. While
    I accept that this will suit many people, I believe that advertisement
    plays an integral part of business and commerce and it is not simply a kind
    of recreation.

    On the one hand, there are a variety of reasons why consumers will be
    willing to purchase the qualitative products meeting their demands. One
    reason is that a large number of people in modern society are ready to
    spend more on the goods whose quality is high rather than the poor ones.
    The explanation for this is because these products are more durable and
    customers do not need to replace them every few months, so people are able
    to save more money and these also meet their requirements. Furthermore,
    human’s life standards develop significantly throughout periods of time and
    manufacturers ought to design the products which are not only usable for
    their main functions but also meet other demands such as shape, color or
    material. Therefore, high quality commodities can easily be found and
    bought by consumers even without the aid of advertisement since they
    excellently perform their functions and are in marvellous appearance and
    material, taking a pair of sneakers made by Adidas as an example.

    On the other hand, we cannot deny the important role of advertising in the
    development of contemporary business. Firstly, nearly month by month,
    buyers have more than one brand new option for their purchase and the
    question is that why they must buy the products from a certain brand while
    there are thousands of others in the market. The answer lies in the
    advertising operation, which shows advertisements on the media such as
    television, radio, newspaper or the internet to the customers roughly every
    day in order to raise the certain brand position in purchasers’ mind.
    Consequently, if they want to spend money, the brand name in the first line
    of list will have more chance to be chosen and the sales figure will
    increase steadily. Secondly, although the advertisements are usually
    hilarious and memorable, which makes them seem to be a recreational
    selection, they also are able to give profound life lessons and can even
    touch the soul and emotion. For instance, the story about a deaf girl who
    wants to attend a musical concert with her violin leads to the lesson about
    motivation and effort to overcome adverse circumstances, and this story
    comes from a shampoo advertisement video, which becomes widespread and
    helps the shampoo brand be more well known. Hence, real values always make
    the difference.

    In conclusion, it is certainly true that quality and needs can be crucial
    factors for many people when choosing a product, but this is by no means
    advertising does not play any essential role in the growth of the business.

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    [1/13/2018, 7:34:11 PM] Cám ơn các bạn!

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  • #161398

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    “There are a variety of reasons…” I use the phrase according to the frame in the writing course: not “there is a variety of reasons…”

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  • #161404

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    Although the advertisements are usually hilarious and memorable, which makes them seem to be a recreational selection, they also are able to give profound life lessons and can even touch the soul and emotion
    Câu “they also are able to give…” mình nghĩ không tách thành câu riêng vì nó đi chung với mệnh đề although.

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