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TonyK opinion 6 Students and other activities

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    Tony K
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    Nowadays, full- time university students tend to focus on their studying.
    Some people think it is essential for university students to be involved in
    other activities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

    While some people argue that undergraduate students need to concentrate
    completely on collecting knowledge, others suppose that students should
    also spend their time on other activities. In my opinion, I believe that
    other activities outside the studying also play an important part of
    students’ relationship and stress relief besides the undeniably essential
    role of studying.

    On the one hand, there are a variety of reasons why students should spend
    most of time in college learning and researching to accumulate knowledge
    and skills. One reason is that university time is the perfect time to build
    a solid background for future career. In this period, students can stay
    reading books in library or experimenting in laboratory for hours without
    disturbance, and they also might apply for a part time job to acquire
    practical work experience. Therefore, after graduation, they can work
    immediately in company and integrate successfully with other colleagues.
    Furthermore, when attending to the social life after graduation, adults are
    easily affected and distracted by a large number of factors such as family,
    marriage, financial burden and health. And they do not have much time to
    improve the knowledge and enhance the skills in comparison to students.

    On the other hand, other activities such as social and leisure ones are
    also a necessity of student life with their certain roles. Firstly,
    participation in voluntary activities can help students share sympathy and
    care with less fortunate people and communities. In fact, some have a
    chance to realize their true mission of life about the voluntary activities
    and fund raising and they might change career to build and develop a better
    world. Secondly, after school time, students need join in entertainment
    activities such as music club, sports or bar to relieve strain and broaden
    views about other aspects of life. For example, when a person takes part in
    a music club, he not only enjoys the music but also has chance to
    communicate and build relationship with many people who share interests in
    common.

    In conclusion, it is certainly true that the studying plays a crucial
    position in students’ life, but this by no means that students merely
    learns and forget all other factors which also influence every person’s
    life.

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    Please kindly check my notes here, and feel free to leave comments if you have any questions. Thanks a lot!

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