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    4. In many countries, more and more young people are leaving school and unable to find jobs after graduation. What problems do you think youth unemployment will cause to the individual and the society? What measures can be taken to address this problem?

    It is true that apart of countries in the world faces the situation which is many students cannot gain jobs after graduation. There are a number of problems from this negative trend and steps can be taken to tackle the issue.
    Young people unable to find jobs after graduating university that causes lots of problems. Firstly, if this situation lasts long time, it will definitely lead to people lose their perception in educational systems. Students have to spend four or five years more to learn university, however, the proportion they can get works which is very low. Besides that, few successful millionaires, such as Bill Gates, have not graduated but they are very success; therefore, following generations will lose their believe about education as a drastic consequence. Secondly, youth unemployment will become a financial burden of the communities. Government have to take the money from national budgets to take care of them temporarily.
    However, there is a range of measures that governments can take to solve the problems described above. The first solution could be that universities can improve their curriculums suiting for real demands of various organizations. For instance, nowadays, many companies want to recruit employees who have public speaking skills, so university can held speaking courses for students. Furthermore, government should create temporary jobs for youth unemployment. This solution will give jobs for unemployed and also save a lot of money for government.
    To put in a nutshell, it is clear that unemployment is a important consideration of many countries, so government should have efficient measures to solve this phenomenon.

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    [4/28/2018, 9:49:44 PM] Cám ơn các bạn!

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