• Chữa bài IELTS Task 2

    • cheryl

      Participant
      May 24, 2017 at 10:20 pm

      Wild animals have no place to live in the 21st century, so protecting them is a waste of resources. To what extent do you agree or disagree.
      Wide animals are facing to the ongoing threat of threat of extinction thus many environmental activists are calling to protect them while others think that it is wasteful. Personally, I believe that we should protect animals as much as possible for following reasons.
      It is absurd to say that wild animals have no place nowadays. As Earth planet exists not only for benefit of humans, people have no right to declare that Earth have no space for any spices. Humans as well as animals or plants are all beloved kids of nature mother hence she loves all spices equally. And she is the only one who can say which spices are reserved or being extincted. Furthermore, there is no compelling reason why we should let animals die out. There are plenty of rooms for all humans and animals living peaceful together.
      Besides, protecting wild animals is not waste of resources for some reasons. Firstly, of people let animals face to extinction, ecosystem will be badly threated. The reason for this threatening is that the missing of one specific animal affects the food chain which also influences other spices. Secondly, scientists will face to the loss of genetic reservoir due to the missing of some type of animals. Scientists will find difficulties to identify particular genetic issues or create better domestic animals. By protecting them and their habitats, we maintain the natural balance of all lives on Earth.
      In conclusion, we have no right to decide whether or not wild animals should exist, and I believe that we should do everything we can to protect them.

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    • Huong Trang

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      May 26, 2017 at 1:54 pm

      You can find the revised version attached. Feel free to comment if you have any query.

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