• Chữa bài IELTS Task 2

    • K.nguyen

      Participant
      December 25, 2015 at 1:10 am

      Some people regard video games as harmless fun, or even as a useful educational tool. Others, however, believe that videos games are having an adverse effect on the people who play them. In your opinion, do the drawbacks of video games outweigh the benefits?

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    • An Tran

      Member
      December 28, 2015 at 12:25 am

      checked :)

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    • K.nguyen

      Participant
      December 28, 2015 at 11:06 pm

      CAn u give me more suggestions on how to improve it to get 7.5 ?

    • An Tran

      Member
      December 29, 2015 at 12:45 am

      here you are!

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