Chữa bài IELTS Task 2

Some people think that it is best to live in a horizontal city while others thing of vertical city. Discuss both view and give your opinion.
Some people believe that living in a horizontal city is the best, while the opponent of this idea prefer to live in vertical city. There are benefits to residents who settle in cities which include low-rise building, while I would argue that dwelling in the city with skyscrapers or high-rise construction is better choice.
On the one hand, there are some reasons why residents should settle in the city which have horizontal construction. Firsly, people do not have to pay too much for building services, which helps them to use this money to use other important things such as the costs of living. If they dwell in high building, they might spend the great amount of money on paying for some services such as sericury or parking. Secondly, living lower to ground is safer for individuals when ecemercu occur. For example, if a fire starts in a house, people might quickly escape from this dangerous area because it is not hight off the ground and it do not take much time to leave.
On the other hand, I believe that living in vertical city is the better option. Firstly, because the huge amount of people dwell in apartment in the high building, there might be more lands for public usages. Therefore, the government would be able to build more hospitals, schools or the places for entertainment. Moreover, it is much more convinient for inhabitants to settle in high-rise building which offers a wide range of goods and services, thank to shoppling malls and service centers on lower floor. This helps residents to save time and money without travelling too far.
In conclusion, although living in horizontal city has advantages to some extent, it seems to me that dwelling in a apartment in high building is the best choice.