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argument essay in business profits

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    Kieu Trung
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    Hi,
    I want to check my essay in terms of topic sentences, academic words as well as repeating words (can help me paraphrase to avoid repeating words), variety of grammar, check relevant between emphasis topic sentence and ideas.
    Thanks

  • #280505

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    Hi,
    -Your essay is too long: more than 1100 words, so I do not think you have enough time to write down in exam date.
    -You should focus on the topic that do you agree or disagree and raise your opinion.
    Please write again and upload word file.

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