• Chữa bài IELTS Task 1

    • Lê Thị Xuân Oanh

      February 10, 2017 at 8:11 pm

      The table below shows the numbers of visitors to Ashdown Museum during the year before and the year after it was refurbished. The charts show the resuft of survey asking visitors how satisfied the were with their visit, during the same two periods.
      Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
      Write at least 150 words.

      Given are two figures providing a comparison of visitors sightseeing to Ashdown Museum throughout the year before and after it was designed again, as well as the consequences of survey from visitors who were satisfactory when they went that place.
      Overall, out of the total 74,000 of sightseers who visited Ashdown Museum before it was refurbished, dissatisfaction held the lion’s share of survey satisfaction. By contrast, most of visitors had satisfied emotion during the year after Ashdown Museum was changed.
      The total number of visitors are 74,000 people in the year before Ashdown Museum was refurbished, but there was a sharp went up in the number of visitors who arrived that place, 92,000.
      Results of survey had dramatically revolutionized in very satisfied which increased more than two times, from 15% of 74,000 people to 35% of 92,000 people. There was a slight growth in the number of satisfactory in 92,000 individuals, accounted for one-third (40%). The number of dissatisfaction dropped rapidly after changing of Ashdown Museum, a minority (15%). The proportion of visitors who felt very dissatisfied into 74,000 people, are half of that of the sightseers after Ashdown Museum was improved, 10% compared to 5%.

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      February 11, 2017 at 3:02 pm

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