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    Many people believe that international tourism is a bad thing for their country. What are reasons? Solution to change negative attitudes?
    Nowadays, global tourism is becoming increasingly popular. Some argue that worldwide tourism has negative effects on the host nations. In this essay, I will look at the main causes of the problem in terms of environmental problems and public order and propose some solutions for governments.
    One of the first problems of global tourism is that there is a considerable growth in the number of environmental issues. This means that international tourism make great proportion of foreign visitors rise, this may lead to the rapid increase of garbage from tourist services, particularly unrecycled rubbish such as nylon packing or plastic bottles, resulting in polluted environment growth. Another major problem is the uncontrollable public order. This is because there are challenges for governments to know where tourists stay so policemen find it difficult to protect foreign visitors from violence or pillager issues, etc, by contrary, when those visitors break the law, the government might not know where they are to core them.
    It is important that action is taken to combat these problems. Government should encourage the tourist service industry use much recycled products such as paper straw in stead of plastic straw. In addition, government should ban littering in public by using foreign languages in signs. Regarding with public order, governments should invest more budget in installing lots of security cameras in some tourist attractions and training professional policemen who can speak foreign languages.
    All in all, there are lots of serious problems related to the increasing worldwide tourism development. Action must be taken urgently, otherwise the situation will get worse.

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