• Chữa bài IELTS Task 2

    • UTC.EDU

      Participant
      December 1, 2016 at 10:55 am

      Some people say that the government should not put money on building
      theatres and sports stadiums. They should spend more money on medical care
      and education. Do you agree or disagree ?

      Many individuals claim that the government should invest in health care and
      education instead of constructing theatres and sports stadiums. While it is
      true that the authority needs to focus on health care and education, I
      would argue that it is also necessary to build theatres and sports
      stadiums.

      To begin with, there are some reasons why the government should spend money
      on health care and education. Firstly, because health care plays an
      important role in maintaining and improving the health and safety of
      residents, the state should spend much money on this sector. For instance,
      a good health care system can prevent and treat serious diseases, which
      acts as a precursor so that citizens can be stronger and have a better life
      quality. Secondly, since education creates huge impacts on most other
      fields, government leaders must invest much money in this concern. A clear
      illustration is that education plays an integral part in training skilled
      staffs for other fields.

      However, I believe that it is necessary to pay attention to building
      theatres and sports stadiums. The first supporting point for this view is
      that in the modern life, entertainment needs of residents has increased
      dramatically. For instance, in Vietnam, on weekends, families often go to
      theatres to watch entertaining programs after tiring workdays.
      Additionally, the state should spend money on building theatres and sports
      stadiums because those facilities are vital to tourism promotion. For
      example, theatres or sports stadiums are used to organise special events or
      sports competition, all of which can attract a large number of tourists.

      In conclusion, while the authority should focus on education and medical
      care, I believe that it is vital to construct theatres and sports stadiums.

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    • My Trương

      Member
      December 3, 2016 at 9:57 am

      Corrected! Feel free to leave any comment.

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