Chữa bài IELTS Task 2
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Music plays an important role in society. Others think that it is simply a form of entertainment for individuals. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Some people think that music is only interesting form for leisure activities. However, in my opinion it is integral to show the presentation of music in life.
Obviously, music is not considered as a key factor in society by all people. Some adolescents or teenagers are permitted to pursue music as their career because their parents may think that it does not bring some practical benefits of for society or their children. One of the reasons is that music is not actually belongs to basic demands of human beings; therefore, people can easily experience a comfortable life without music. Some may consider that music and varieties of other type of art such as painting, movies, literature can not provide their children a highly appreciated profession in society.
In contrast, I have the opponent view. I really reckon that it is more beneficial for music in life. First, music shows unique culture of every people since the breaths of life are described vividly in ancient and temporary songs. Men and women can feel the difference over the time when they enjoy music. Besides, it is extremely useful to utilize music as a media facility. For instance, songs seem to inspire the patriotism of people to enhance the determinations of struggle against their defences. Moreover, musical sound is also the best treatment for relieving sorrows and pains. Some individuals might seek balance and peace in their mind with music. Especially, music can hold people together. In fact, high schools and universities regularly organized festival music to promote and increase the friendship of students. In recent years,many researches have proved that music enables to stimulate activities of nerves and brain. Melodies of classical music is activators to enhance concentration of students whistle they do their homework.
In conclusion, music is not only a means of entertainment but also an essential part in life.[3/26/2018, 11:14:24 AM] Cám ơn các bạn!
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