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    [12/21/2018, 4:24:48 PM] Cám ơn các bạn!

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    Some people think that the best way to ensure road safety is to increase the minimum legal age for driving cars or riding motorbikes. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
    People have different views about how to travel on the road is much more safety. While I agree that raising the minimum legal age for driving cars or riding motorbikes is a good policy in some ways, I would argue that there are better solutions which can be adopted to reduce the traffic accidents

    On the one hand, I believe it is a good idea to increase the minimum age for driving. Firstly, when people are young, they are usually less mature and less responsible with their manner, so they might not be aware of the importance of following rules. Therefore, it is reasonable to ban them from traveling on the street to prevent them from breaking the law and causing accidents. Secondly, the young are more experienced, they can know how to react quickly to handle dangerous situations. To illustrate, if breaks of car stop working, young drivers might panic and accidents are more likely to occur.

    On the other hand, it seems to me that some measures can be implemented to ensure road safety. The first solution is that stricter law for driving offenders such as punishment for driving offenders. For instance, breaking the traffic rules should pay huge fines or be banned permanently from commuting on street. As a result, commuters would respect the law and traffic accidents can be reduced. Another solution is to encourage people to use public transport rather than private vehicles. This can be done by increasing the frequency and reduce the price of buses and tubes to make it convenient for users.

    In conclusion, while it seems to me that increasing legal age for driving is a good measure in a number of ways. I believe that there are more effective steps which should be taken to ensure the traveling on the street is safe for everyone.

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